1. Overall, when you think about the big picture of your writing, what improved? How did it get better? Why?
Well a thing that I improved in my writing would have to have been my sentence structure because it was like a six paragraph essay. Some of the things I changed in my article were getting rid of unnecessary detail from my article. I would also say that I have also improved on my structure of my writing by making it flow, reading out loud to find mistakes.
Well a thing that I improved in my writing would have to have been my sentence structure because it was like a six paragraph essay. Some of the things I changed in my article were getting rid of unnecessary detail from my article. I would also say that I have also improved on my structure of my writing by making it flow, reading out loud to find mistakes.
2. Overall, when you think about the big picture of your writing, what still needs work? What do you think will help you improve? Why?
The thing I would say needs improving in my writing would be still the unnecessary detail in my writing because I try to describe to many things in my writing. Well the things that helped me improved were critiques by classmate, teacher, editors, or hummanabubies. For this process I had to get many critiques to make my article flow and by not having to much detail.
The thing I would say needs improving in my writing would be still the unnecessary detail in my writing because I try to describe to many things in my writing. Well the things that helped me improved were critiques by classmate, teacher, editors, or hummanabubies. For this process I had to get many critiques to make my article flow and by not having to much detail.
3. Specifically, show us something that improved and describe the path it took to get better. You can quote your article, your drafts, link to evidence, etc.
4. Describe something specific (or a few things!) that you learned about writing.
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