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Thesis:
World War II was a war that lasted 6 years and begin in the late 30's but early 40's and it was a time when Nazi Germany and the Axis power were taking over all of Europe and the a time when America and the allies forces where trying to stop the Axis power.Captain America a comic book hero who was created during WWII and fought in the war against Hitler and the Nazi soldiers. Captain America was a hero that children look up to while there hero's where off fighting the real war,like General Dwight D.Eisenhower who was also the thirty-fourth President of the U.S. General Dwight D.Eisenhower was also a five star General who care much for his country just as much as Captain America did for his country in the comics.

United in this determination and with unshakable faith in the cause for which we fight, we will, with God's help, go forward to our greatest victory. - General Dwight D. Eisenhower (1944)

Body Paragraphs:

P1. Captain America wasn't born with his power but given to him as a second chance because he was once a young man who wanted to fight for our country during WWII but was turned down because of his weak, skinny body.

-who's Steve Rogers?
-super-solider serum
-beginning of Captain America

P2. Once the known as "Steve Rogers" Captain America was trained to become the one of his kind, by training and controlling his new powers for the upcoming battles with foes such as.........

-fighting Hitler and Nazi's
-One of a kind
-new villains
-tragic story

P3. Captain America is a promoter of freedom and the American Way and bringing good to America by fighting greed, crime, racism, and hatred.

-awaken from his icy slumber
-Registration Act
-Bringing good to America

Conclusion:
World War II was a war that lasted 6 years and begin in the late 30's but early 40's and it was a time when Nazi Germany and the Axis power were taking over all of Europe and the a time when America and the allies forces where trying to stop the Axis power.Captain America a comic book hero who was created during WWII and fought in the war against Hitler and the Nazi soldiers. Captain America was a hero that children look up to while there hero's where off fighting the real war,like General Dwight D.Eisenhower who was also the thirty-fourth President of the U.S. General Dwight D.Eisenhower was also a five star General who care much for his country just as much as Captain America did for his country in the comics. Captain America is what you call a true hero and from what he did in the comics and from what happened in the real war we can see that theirs a hero in all of us like General Dwight D.Eisenhower and Captain America and for all those who fought or died in WWII did so with pride. Just as Captain America would if he was real because I feel that those are the men who should be called a true man, patriot, veteran, or what ever you want to call a solider who fights for our country and people.